Hello!! My name is Haruna Kawatsu. Nice to met you. I’m 19 years old now. May10, I will become 20 years old. So, I will reach drinking age. My character is going my own my way and very active. I like sports, for example, playing volleyball, basket ball and running. My hobby is listening o music , dancing, andplaying the piano. I like various genres of music. How about you? What’s your family’s hobby?
I am student in KGU. I am a freshman now. I am an English major. I like English very much! But I can not speak English very well yet. I’m sorry. But I can speak everyday conversation.
I have five family people and two dogs in my family. My father is 54 years old and he is a banker. My mother is the same age and She is care worker. My young people is high school student. She is a famous player of Rhythmic gymnastics is also a student at the University. She studies about nursing. How many people with your family and do you have a pet? Do you have a cat ? I am allergic to cats. But I like animals very much.
I am looking forward to watching many animals in Australia. I have been to Australia before by school excursion in my high school days. Then, I did farm stay in Melbourne. It was a very good experience and I had a wonderful time there. So, I though I want to go Australia again in my University days.
Lastly, I don’t have likes and dislikes about food.
I am looking forward to meet you and to stay Australia again. Please say hello to your family for me.
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Hello Haruna!
Nice to see you!
My name is Toshi, a commentator of your blog.
"Who am I", it's so unique title isn't it. It makes me remember film title "Who am I", Jacky Chen's film.
By the way, you'v been to Autralia, Melbourn before havn't you? I've been to Australia too. Did you go to see the Pneguin Parade? Many Penguins walk into the sea, and it's so cute.
If you hadn't, try next time.
See you on next blog.
I'm looking forward to read next.
Hi Haruna,
Very good, but you need to take out the 'returns' in your post. Each return is like a paragraph, which is why your essay looks like a lot of separate sentences.
hi!haruna.
i love animal too.
Hi Haruna!!
My father is also working as banker.
Where's bank?
Higo bank or Kumamoto Family bank?
Your dog is so cute. What's his or her name?
Hi,Haruna!
I like animals too.
Your pets are very cute.
I want to see them again!
What kind of music do you play on the piano?
Hi!!! Your essay is interesting.What do you like seafoods.
I have a dog too.What's kind of animals do you like?
Hello Haruna!
Your essay is interesting. I want to read that again.
Hi, Haruna. I first Know that You had gone to Australia. I wanna go there. Did you see the Ayers Rock?
Hi, Haruna! I like sport, too. Do you like watchig sport or doing it?
HI!Haruna!
I also like dancing! I like hip-hop.
What kind of dance do you like?
Hi!
Do you have two dogs? What kind of dogs?
Dear mangi madang!
Thank you comment. Nice to meet you. This essay "Who am I" is my subject in my University. Yes, I have been to Melbourn in Australia. But I have not seen Pengin Parade then. If I have chance to go there,I want to see it!! Thank you.
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