I am just talking about most my favorite movie. It's “Titanic”. Have you ever seen this movie? Of course, you know this wonderful movie. This is an effectively story when in 1991 happened and it was productioned in 1997. Direction is a James Cameron. He has ever productioned “Terminator” in 1991 and “Aliens”in 1986. So I like him very much. When he production new movie, I always watch it. The so called James Cameron otaku. This movie is a most very grieve love story that I have ever seen of his movie. The main character of this story are Jack Dawson (Leonard Dicaprio) and Rose Dewitt (Kate Wirslet ). Both Jack and Rose is great actor. In this story, they met in luxurious ship and fall in love with each other. By degrees their love is flame up. But their ending of love is not happy. Jack is a very poor but he has great hot heart and he is also brave and manly. He could make Rose happy only few minutes. She also too. Her life became great career through his help. If she did not help by Jack……. If she did not meet with him……her life will be not. I favorite scene is a last scene. In the sea Jack says arose “Hold on just a little bit longer.”I am always moved to tears. I am bowed by grief. But this movie is always making me happy. Please watch “Titanic”!!
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2010/01/15
My home town
My hometown
My hometown ,Kumamoto , is a delisious food place. Do you know famous food in kumumamoto? For example ikinaridanngo, karashirennkonn, basashi and water melon. Especially ikinaridanngo is very popularity from Kumamoto poople. This is that everyone can cook yourself easily. Water melon is a special product of Uekitown. It is known by all parts of the country.
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My hometown ,Kumamoto , is a delisious food place. Do you know famous food in kumumamoto? For example ikinaridanngo, karashirennkonn, basashi and water melon. Especially ikinaridanngo is very popularity from Kumamoto poople. This is that everyone can cook yourself easily. Water melon is a special product of Uekitown. It is known by all parts of the country.
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My best memory
My best memory
When I was a child, my family often climbed the mountain on a holiday or long vacation. When I an junior high school, I went to Aso to climb Kuzyu mountain with my family. Then I have already climbed the mountain for two times. But every time we couldn’t climb to the top of the mountain, because we were young and the mountain is a very high mountain. But at last, we could climb kuzyu mountain when I am junior high school. When I stood the top of mountain, I moved by beautiful piece of scenery. I was very tired but I could get very important things.
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favorite places
Now, I will introduce my favorite places. First, I like my University very much. There are many my funny friends and good teachers. I like them very much!! In specially, I like free time to spend with my friends. We talk about a lot of thinks. For example, about our life, about friends and about love story. We can always enjoy the time. Also, I can enjoy class time everyday. English class is very difficult. But I like it very much.
And my university has a lot of tree. Now, we can enjoy colored leaves and relax by them so I love this season the best.
Next my favorite place is my room. There are not so large. But the room is fit for me and my room is surround with my favorite color. So, the room make me always happy and relax. Of course my house is also my favorite places. There are my good family and cute dogs. I can relax very much.
I like yuria’s car. Because her car is small and have a cute color and seat. I think that not so large space make me calm. Her car’s kind is lappin and the color is purple. Also, I often rode on her car to go to University. when I rode on her car, I can listening to music of my favorite. Because our favorite artist is same.
Our university’s library is also my favorite places. There are many kind of books and video. There are very popular by this University student. I usually go to there When I am free time or after school. Always I enjoy the time with my friends.
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And my university has a lot of tree. Now, we can enjoy colored leaves and relax by them so I love this season the best.
Next my favorite place is my room. There are not so large. But the room is fit for me and my room is surround with my favorite color. So, the room make me always happy and relax. Of course my house is also my favorite places. There are my good family and cute dogs. I can relax very much.
I like yuria’s car. Because her car is small and have a cute color and seat. I think that not so large space make me calm. Her car’s kind is lappin and the color is purple. Also, I often rode on her car to go to University. when I rode on her car, I can listening to music of my favorite. Because our favorite artist is same.
Our university’s library is also my favorite places. There are many kind of books and video. There are very popular by this University student. I usually go to there When I am free time or after school. Always I enjoy the time with my friends.
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Second Language
Second language
In my opinion, American students should have to learn second language. For one thing, now English is very popular language around the world. Of course it is also compulsory subject in Japan, So we can enjoy other country language and help our life. So If American student can study second language, they can broaden their horizon. Also now many country’s people go to America to study English. So, if American student can understand second language, they can help visitor, overseas student, for many times. Also , they can have interest about many other country. I think to learn second language is very important.
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2010/01/14
BR -16: Dog in school
I read a book which name is Dog in school. I have two dogs, so I choose this book and try to read. A dog was standing outside the lift. It had a fluffy coat with black and
brown markings. It had big, floppy ears.
Sam met a dog on her way to school. It had a fluffy coat with black and brown markings. The dog had no name tag on its collar. So Sam decided to call the dog "Mystery". Sam go for her school and the dog followed her. Sam shut the gate so that the dog could not get in. She said "Good bye." to the dog. Children were studying at their class room, they hear the bark of dog. Everyone upset and they found the dog was outside the window. "There is a dog in the school," the children shouted. A man who is a teacher tried to catch it. The teacher went outside and Mystery ran away. The children helped him to catch it. They chased the dog in the playground. Mystery looked happily. The dog ran from one classroom to another, barking and jumping and wagging its tail. Finally, Mystery ran into a cupboard. A teacher shut the door. When the teacher opened the door quietly, there was a dog which had upset all the paint. It was not black and brown any more. He was red and blue and green and yellow. A head teacher had seen the dog before at the pub, so she took it back. The people at the pub were glad to get their dog back. His true name was "Trouble!" I think that the dog makes some trouble, but it is very cute. The dog which I had was vigor like "Trouble". If you have the time to read. Please read this book.
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brown markings. It had big, floppy ears.
Sam met a dog on her way to school. It had a fluffy coat with black and brown markings. The dog had no name tag on its collar. So Sam decided to call the dog "Mystery". Sam go for her school and the dog followed her. Sam shut the gate so that the dog could not get in. She said "Good bye." to the dog. Children were studying at their class room, they hear the bark of dog. Everyone upset and they found the dog was outside the window. "There is a dog in the school," the children shouted. A man who is a teacher tried to catch it. The teacher went outside and Mystery ran away. The children helped him to catch it. They chased the dog in the playground. Mystery looked happily. The dog ran from one classroom to another, barking and jumping and wagging its tail. Finally, Mystery ran into a cupboard. A teacher shut the door. When the teacher opened the door quietly, there was a dog which had upset all the paint. It was not black and brown any more. He was red and blue and green and yellow. A head teacher had seen the dog before at the pub, so she took it back. The people at the pub were glad to get their dog back. His true name was "Trouble!" I think that the dog makes some trouble, but it is very cute. The dog which I had was vigor like "Trouble". If you have the time to read. Please read this book.
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My friend Kana.
My friend Kana
I have many friend so I feel very happy. I thank them every day. They support me any time. I am very happy. Today I introduce my friend. So I introduce one of my friend Kana. She is my class mate. Do you know her?? She is not so toll. She has black hair. She has big eyes. She has long black eyelash. She has white cell phone. She has brown bag every day. She has brown boot. Do you know her??
Her name is Kana Miura. She is 20 years old. She lives in Obiyama. There is not so far from Kumamoto Gakuen University. She come this university by her bicycle. But her bicycle is little broken. But she use it. If I have many money, I want to buy new bicycle for her. Maybe she is able to very happy. Her junior high school is Nishikino junior high school? Do you know there? I don’ t know where there is build. But I hear the name. Her high school is Kita high school. Do you know the school. There is very famous and popular in kaumamoto. When, I was junior high school student, I want to go their very much. because when I was child, I went to English class, and the old sister student wear Kita high school uniform. It was very cute. So I want to there since before. Kita high school is very far from Kana’s home. Kita high school is near my house. If I went to kita high school, maybe I belong dance club. She also dance club, so we could meet more first. Now, we are same class and we study English . Kana is very cool and kind. If I sleep so long and I couldn’t class, she call me. If I couldn’t attendance our same class, she bring print for me. I thank for her very much.
Kana belong VIVA club. VIVA is ビバリーヒルズカンパニー. She is sub manager of her club. Her club’s member is very few. Only ….10 people!! They not have other grade student. Very small club. But the manager is very popular and famous. He has very bug body. And his appetite is very wonderful. Kana always support him and her club with partner. Partner is Gentoku. He is very kind man. I think so very much. I talk before with him, he gave me many advice. I save his words. He is very good parson. His kind is many people know. I like him very much. I met him in university, downtown, where, I feel very happy. Kana and he is very friendly. They also funny. I like funny friends and I have many funny friends.
Kana have 3sisters. They all girl. Everyone cute and cool. I have been to Kana’s room any time. She can’t clean room. So, I go to her room every time I say her ‘you must cleanup your room. You can clean !!’. clean up her room is not so easy. Many goods have her room. At high schooldays, at junior school days, very old goods. All is her favorite goods.
Kana and I like dance very much. she dancing at the high school days. I also dance before. When we entranced this university, we don’t play it. We say that we go to dance school this year. we want to dance very much!!
Kumanoto Gakuen University have a dance club. My friend belongs it and she enjoy the dance with her friend. When, club’s dance party, festival, event of downtown, they enjoy dance. If you have time, please do there to watch dance. You can enjoy sure.
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I have many friend so I feel very happy. I thank them every day. They support me any time. I am very happy. Today I introduce my friend. So I introduce one of my friend Kana. She is my class mate. Do you know her?? She is not so toll. She has black hair. She has big eyes. She has long black eyelash. She has white cell phone. She has brown bag every day. She has brown boot. Do you know her??
Her name is Kana Miura. She is 20 years old. She lives in Obiyama. There is not so far from Kumamoto Gakuen University. She come this university by her bicycle. But her bicycle is little broken. But she use it. If I have many money, I want to buy new bicycle for her. Maybe she is able to very happy. Her junior high school is Nishikino junior high school? Do you know there? I don’ t know where there is build. But I hear the name. Her high school is Kita high school. Do you know the school. There is very famous and popular in kaumamoto. When, I was junior high school student, I want to go their very much. because when I was child, I went to English class, and the old sister student wear Kita high school uniform. It was very cute. So I want to there since before. Kita high school is very far from Kana’s home. Kita high school is near my house. If I went to kita high school, maybe I belong dance club. She also dance club, so we could meet more first. Now, we are same class and we study English . Kana is very cool and kind. If I sleep so long and I couldn’t class, she call me. If I couldn’t attendance our same class, she bring print for me. I thank for her very much.
Kana belong VIVA club. VIVA is ビバリーヒルズカンパニー. She is sub manager of her club. Her club’s member is very few. Only ….10 people!! They not have other grade student. Very small club. But the manager is very popular and famous. He has very bug body. And his appetite is very wonderful. Kana always support him and her club with partner. Partner is Gentoku. He is very kind man. I think so very much. I talk before with him, he gave me many advice. I save his words. He is very good parson. His kind is many people know. I like him very much. I met him in university, downtown, where, I feel very happy. Kana and he is very friendly. They also funny. I like funny friends and I have many funny friends.
Kana have 3sisters. They all girl. Everyone cute and cool. I have been to Kana’s room any time. She can’t clean room. So, I go to her room every time I say her ‘you must cleanup your room. You can clean !!’. clean up her room is not so easy. Many goods have her room. At high schooldays, at junior school days, very old goods. All is her favorite goods.
Kana and I like dance very much. she dancing at the high school days. I also dance before. When we entranced this university, we don’t play it. We say that we go to dance school this year. we want to dance very much!!
Kumanoto Gakuen University have a dance club. My friend belongs it and she enjoy the dance with her friend. When, club’s dance party, festival, event of downtown, they enjoy dance. If you have time, please do there to watch dance. You can enjoy sure.
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BR -15: Rapunzel
Summary
One day, a man and his wife were walking past a witch’s garden. They were so hungry that they took some of the witch’s lettuce. Soon they were hungry again, and the man went to the witch’s garden for more lettuce. However, the witch saw him. Then the witch said that she would take his first baby away from him.
Not long after, the man and his wife had a baby girl. The witch came and took her away. She named her baby Rapunzel. The witch locked Rapunzel high up in a tower. Every day, the witch came to see Rapunzel. She called up and let down Rapunzel’s hair. Rapunzel threw her long hair out of the window for the witch to climb up.
One day, a prince heard a girl singing and saw Rapunzel at the window. Then the witch came, and he saw the witch climbed up her long hair. After the witch gone away, he tried to do like the witch. Rapunzel threw her hair out of the window for the prince to climb up. The prince and Rapunzel talked for a long time. The prince promised he would help her to escape. The next day, the witch came to the tower and cut all her beautiful hair. After that, the prince came to the tower to escape Rapunzel. He called her and long hair came down from the window. When he arrived at the window, the witch suddenly appeared in front of him. The witch threw the prince from the tower. Ashe fell, he hurt his eyes. Rapunzel wanted to help him, but the witch took her away. The price went everywhere searching for Rapunzel, but he couldn’t find her. Then one day, he heard a girl singing. At last he found Raounzel. After that, the prince took Rapunzel away to his palace. Very soon, they were married.
Impression
After I finished reading this book, I was happy. I was worried if Rapunzel could be saved by the prince, but the end was happy end. I like romantic story like this book. I think Princes absolutely can save princesses at the end. I want to meet a prince too. If you interested this book, please read it!
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One day, a man and his wife were walking past a witch’s garden. They were so hungry that they took some of the witch’s lettuce. Soon they were hungry again, and the man went to the witch’s garden for more lettuce. However, the witch saw him. Then the witch said that she would take his first baby away from him.
Not long after, the man and his wife had a baby girl. The witch came and took her away. She named her baby Rapunzel. The witch locked Rapunzel high up in a tower. Every day, the witch came to see Rapunzel. She called up and let down Rapunzel’s hair. Rapunzel threw her long hair out of the window for the witch to climb up.
One day, a prince heard a girl singing and saw Rapunzel at the window. Then the witch came, and he saw the witch climbed up her long hair. After the witch gone away, he tried to do like the witch. Rapunzel threw her hair out of the window for the prince to climb up. The prince and Rapunzel talked for a long time. The prince promised he would help her to escape. The next day, the witch came to the tower and cut all her beautiful hair. After that, the prince came to the tower to escape Rapunzel. He called her and long hair came down from the window. When he arrived at the window, the witch suddenly appeared in front of him. The witch threw the prince from the tower. Ashe fell, he hurt his eyes. Rapunzel wanted to help him, but the witch took her away. The price went everywhere searching for Rapunzel, but he couldn’t find her. Then one day, he heard a girl singing. At last he found Raounzel. After that, the prince took Rapunzel away to his palace. Very soon, they were married.
Impression
After I finished reading this book, I was happy. I was worried if Rapunzel could be saved by the prince, but the end was happy end. I like romantic story like this book. I think Princes absolutely can save princesses at the end. I want to meet a prince too. If you interested this book, please read it!
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My friend!
Few days before, I went to Joyful near the university with my friend, Misa. We had promised, but there was no time to go. So, we went yesterday. After arriving, I ordered chocolate cake, and she ordered ice cream. Do you know joyful’s chocolate cake?? It’s so big!! The cost is 500 yen. I want to eat this chocolate cake before. So I feel very happy to eat it! But to eat this cake, I finished the dinner, so I share this cake with my friend, Misa. We enjoyed talking, drinking juice. Maybe we spend the time so very long time in there. I was nervous then, so I told my mind to her. She listened and gave me some advice. I was happy to have such a good friend. I want to talk to her more. She is kind. I like her. I like her very very much!!
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BR -14: Outline
There was a boy whose name is Tom Candy. He was very poor and his father was scary. One day, he went to the king’s palace to see the prince. He drew closer to the gold studded with pleasure. There, in the palace gardens, was the prince. He was dressed in silks and satins and shining jewels. He wanted to touch the prince. However, he was caught by soldiers. However, the prince was furious and shouted at soldiers. The price gave Tom food. When Tom and the prince watched the mirror, they noticed that they resemble each other. Son they changed their clothes. Tom said the prince bad thing, and the prince got angry. So, the prince said to soldier to eject Tom from the palace. However, soldiers did not notice the dirty boy was the prince. Then the prince was ejected. Tom and the prince started different life. Time went, and the king died and Tom became the new king. So, he decided to announce the people. In there, there was the prince. Other people thought Tom and the prince’s face was the same. People noticed the real prince and the prince could back to the palace. The prince experienced poor life, and he decided to help poor people’s life. If you have the time, please read it and teach your friend!!
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BR -13: Corduroy's Easter Party
I have read "Corduroy's Easter Party."It was before Easter. Corduroy and his friends were at playground. They were playing. Everyone was happy because there were having an Easter party tomorrow. The party was going to be held at Corduroy's house. They believed that presence of Easter Bunny but only Corduroy doesn't believe it. Corduroy didn't want to spoil the fun so he kept his doubt in his mind. Then, they went shopping. It was raining so they put their raincoats and their boots, and they bought their umbrellas. Their first store was the general store. They bought everything they needed. After that, they went to the farm to buy eggs. On their way home, they picked flowers. They went back Corduroy's house, and they started to prepare for an Easter party. Next day, hey had party. It was the best party ever. There were many foods such as cookies, sandwiches and fruit punch. Then, it was time to go out for Easter eggs hunt. Each of them hid a few eggs and the hunt began. After the hunt, they went back inside, and there was a big surprise that a very big basket filled with many kind of candy. It was from the Easter Bunny! They sat around the table, and they were eating the chocolate the Easter Bunny left. Corduroy thought that the Easter Bunny is real. He was happy. Do you think that this story is very nice? If you have time, please read it!!maybe, you feel happy!!
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2010/01/13
BR-12:Rumpelstiltskin
SUMMARY
The miller's daughter is very pretty. One day the king visited miller's village.He liked the daughter soon. Her name is Anna. And the king brings her to his castle. The king, miller and Anna went to the castle but it was very old and crumbling. Then the kings demand her to turn this straw into gold. But Anna cannot it. But a little man came and he helped her many times. Anna promise him that Anna's first child give him. But she didn't want to give. If she find out his name, he came back without nothing. The king tells her strange story, and she find out his name. His name is "Rumpelstiltskin" The king and Anna live happily.
IMPRESSIONI
IMPRESSIONI
read this story with a lot of fun. This story written by The Brothers Grimm. I think that this author's story is very interesting. I thought Rumpelstiltskin is very poor. Because he use magical but he doesn't use it efficiently. And Anna is sly. I think that we promise once, we have to keep my promise at any cost. I want to become wonderful woman.
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BR:11Sara says No!
SUMMARY
Mister Fruit and his daughter Sara working at the market. Mister Fruit is polite. He is friendly. Everybody likes him. Everybody also like Sara. But, Mister Fruit doesn't sell the fruits the correct weight. So Sara is angry. She says him "You must sell the correct weight". But he doesn't listen. But next day, he sells the correct weight and money. Sara is very happy. However in the afternoon, some customer bring back same fruits. It is bad. The customer says "We want our money back!". But Mister Fruit does not give them any money. In the evening, "You're dishonest father!" says Sara. He is angry. "Go to bed!" he shouts at her. The next day miracle happens. When Mister Fruit touches fruit, it becomes bad, but Sara's fruits is very flesh. Everybody buys the fruits from Sara. Next year, Sara is making a lot of money. She has a good job now. Sara's father stays at home.IMPRESSIONthis book taught me the importance of honest. Mister Fruit is dishonest. Business is severe. Trust is the best important thing! Sara is very honest. So she succeeds. I decide to live honesty! If I get a lot of money by cheat many people, I don't live. Honest is the best precious thing. I think that the connect of people to people is very beautiful. I want to be honest women like a Sara!
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BR-10: FROGGY GOES TO SCHOOL
I read "FROGGY GOES TO SCHOOL".SUMMARYIt was the first day of school .Froggy awoke to find he is overslept. He hopped out of bed and flopped outside-flop flop. The school bus was leaving. "Wait! Wait!" he yelled, and took almighty hop. The bus hissed to a stop and the door folded open. When Froggy entered bus everybody laughed and pointed their fingers .Froggy was in his underwear! He hid anywhere. FRRROOOGGYY !called his father. It was a dream! He went to school on time .He was not calm. He was get angry by his teacher. But he enjoyed his first day of school .After school he and his parents leapfrogged all the way home. fin.IMPRESSIONI was very happy to read this story. Froggy is very cute. This story reminds me of the first day of college. I was worried about new classmates .But I entered this college my cares disappear .I came across great, cute, kind, and smart friends. My college days is very happy! I struggle with my friends to we can became English. This story is very simple. I can read this in 5 minutes. Let's everyone read this story "FROGGY GOES TO SCHOOL” Thank you.
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Portfolio for writing IV
Student ID: vwxyz
[Please replace "vwxyz" (above) with
the last five digits of your student number
(without quotation marks). Then delete these remarks.]
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(without quotation marks). Then delete these remarks.]
Portfolio for Writing IV, Section 1A OR 1C
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(See: Note 1, below)
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0.0. OVERVIEW
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)1.0. ESSAYS
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates yyyy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| 2-01a (2009.10.07) | FavPlace | 2009.10.21 | 276 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
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| 2-03a (2009.11.04) | 2009.12.02 | 533 | 4 | 0 | 1 | 0 | ||
| 2-023b (2009.11.18) | 2009.12.18 | 531 | 5 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
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Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Most Improved Essay
(See: Note 4, below.)Selection and Assessment: Which of the three essays that you've written and revised this semester shows the most improvement? What did you do to improve it? Remember that complete answers are better than short answers, focus on your writing (accuracy, appropriacy, content and organization, rather than graphics or other media), and explain at least two major improvements.
- [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your most improved essay, and explain ways that you improved it here.]
2.0. COMMENTS
Showcase | Short titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** | |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | "Speaking speach" | 2009.11.16 | 7 | ||
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | harattyo's diary | 2010.1.4 | 30 | ||
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* |
| 2010.1.4 | 24 | friendry | |
2.4. Most comments on: | Short titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** | |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | |||||
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | ||
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | |||
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | |||||
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | ||
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | |||
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes comments good.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.- ...
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
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3.0. BOOK REVIEWS
3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 2-01 | 2009.12.16 | 251 | 0 | |
BR 2-02 | 2009.12.16 | 373 | 0 | |
BR 2-03 | 2009.12.6 | 277 | 0 | |
BR 2-04 | The Wedding | 2010.1.3 | 143 | 0 |
BR 2-05 | 2010.1.3 | 194 | 0 | |
BR 2-06 | Roman Adventure | 2010.1.3 | 181 | 0 |
BR 2-07 | 2010.1.4 | 347 | 0 | |
BR 2-08 | 2010.1.4 | 308 | 0 | |
BR 2-09 | 2010.1.4 | 210 | 1 | |
BR 2-10 | 2010.1.13 | 203 | 0 | |
BR 2-11 | 2010.1.13 | 240 | 0 | |
BR 2-12 | 2010.1.13 | 190 | 0 | |
BR 2-13 | 2010.1.14 | 250 | 0 | |
BR 2-14 | 2010.1.14 | 223 | 0 | |
BR 2-15 | 2010.1.14 | 373 | 0 | |
BR 2-16 | 2010.1.15 | 306 | 0 | |
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BR 2-18 | ||||
--- | --- | Totals: | 4108 | 2 |
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
4.0. BLOG LAYOUT, LABELING, LINKING, and MEDIA
Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | y | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | y | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ||
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | y | |
| 4.2. Does your blog display a cloud or list of labels in the sidebar? | y | |
| 4.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ||
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| 4.3. Links and media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Do your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? | ||
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ||
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| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ||
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation and readability of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...
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5.0. ADDITIONAL REFLECTIONS ON YOUR BLOG AND YOUR WRITING FOR IT
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, selections, and reflections).- ...
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6.0. ADVICE AND SUGGESTIONS FOR YOURSELF, YOUR PEERS, AND YOUR SUCCESSORS
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from Writing Studio Blog templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc (2007-08), Writing III, §§1a & 1c, Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c (2008-09), and the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III.
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
- The essay selection and explanation item (§1.2, above) differs from that in the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III. Please read the new item carefully before making a selection.
License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License.
Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog, 2010.01.05" (with link, but without quotation marks).
Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog, 2010.01.05" (with link, but without quotation marks).
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