Now, I am in Library in KGU university with Yuria. Because we did our home work. And today, I finishes two homework. Report of culture anthropologist and homework of writing. Home work, I wrote about my university life. To belong club. Report is very difficult. I wrote about Christianity and Islam. Difficult but I learned many things and important things. I was very tired. But I have two test tomorrow. I must study very hard after school and this night.
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2009/07/09
Essey 1-02b: My opinion about University life
There are a lot of kind of people in my university, Kumamoto Gakuen University. They came here who have various purpose and spending. They are enjoying various things. Also, our university has many places and subject. I am enjoying this university life very much..I have been belonged to club lacrosse, since when I entrance this university. I almost spending with club member. For example, Lunch time, my vacant hours, after school, in holiday so on. There are belongs about 50 people. Now, club is very important for my university life. I can refresh and heal by the club every day.My almost friends belongs club in university. For example, Youth hostel club, baseball team, passing club, volley ball club, culture club and flower arrangement club etc. Everyone can make many friend and enjoy the club activity. Of course, they play many things and study very hard too. If they have same subject people in the club, they can teach each other. It’s good things .There are many clubs in Japanese University. I think, almost student belongs it and enjoying. But, any people not belong. They strive any other things. For example, to study very hard, part –time job for to play, to pay school fees and to live themselves. It’s also good and terrible things. But Japanese University is not so popular better than American University. Also, any other student enjoying their hobby and various lesson.I think that University is very freedom. I have many things that I can to do only now. Of course, to study very hard is natural in university life. Because I pay high money for university by our parent or myself and I should have many things to learn. It’s also important things. But, to enjoy club activity is also great. I can learn many things and we can’t learn tings by study.
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Diary
I cannot join club activity. Because I have a lot of things to do today. Today’s club activity is basketball. I was looking forward to it. So, I 
was very worry. Now, I have any homework. I must it. It is not so easy. After class, I took with my friend. She is not same subject and club. But we are very pal. We often talk about love. We enjoy it very much. Now, we want real good boyfriend! Because summer vacation will come soon. We want to go a lot of place with boyfriend this summer. It is not dream. We will come true. After that , I went to library to do home work. I must write report by this Friday. I am very pinch. I did not finish it!! I must to do very hard. In library, I met my friends with same class’s member. They are Kana Miura and Manami Sakamoto. They came library same reason. We try our home work very hard. Kana belongs club ’viva’. Manami belongs club ‘Golf’ They were also join club activity. We do home work with. Then, we organized new our club. But in fact, the team was renewal. Before we named our team ‘Kaityourenn’. But today, we named ‘Hamakatu’. H is Haryna’s H. M is Manami’s M. K is Kana’s K and Katu is Katudou. I think that it’s name is very good name. after that, we went restaurant near the university. There were many students. There were full. But we can dg table not so wait. I was very happy that because I was very hungry. We finished dinner and dessert. I had a good time with favorite
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was very worry. Now, I have any homework. I must it. It is not so easy. After class, I took with my friend. She is not same subject and club. But we are very pal. We often talk about love. We enjoy it very much. Now, we want real good boyfriend! Because summer vacation will come soon. We want to go a lot of place with boyfriend this summer. It is not dream. We will come true. After that , I went to library to do home work. I must write report by this Friday. I am very pinch. I did not finish it!! I must to do very hard. In library, I met my friends with same class’s member. They are Kana Miura and Manami Sakamoto. They came library same reason. We try our home work very hard. Kana belongs club ’viva’. Manami belongs club ‘Golf’ They were also join club activity. We do home work with. Then, we organized new our club. But in fact, the team was renewal. Before we named our team ‘Kaityourenn’. But today, we named ‘Hamakatu’. H is Haryna’s H. M is Manami’s M. K is Kana’s K and Katu is Katudou. I think that it’s name is very good name. after that, we went restaurant near the university. There were many students. There were full. But we can dg table not so wait. I was very happy that because I was very hungry. We finished dinner and dessert. I had a good time with favorite(280 words) (total 7703words)
2009/07/08
portfolio for writing III
Student ID: 13108123
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C
[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
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1.0. Essays
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Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
1-01a (2009.04.08) | A letter for my new host family | 2009.4.8 | 283 | 15 | 0 | |||
1-01b (2009.04.20) | New Who am I !! | 2009.4.22 | 339 | 0 | 0 | |||
(1-01c) | University Life | 2009.5.27 | 300 | 0 | 0 | |||
1-02a (2009.06.01) | rev Dear host family | 2009.6.10 | 334 | 0 | 0 | |||
1-02b (2009.07.06) | Lilo and Stitcｈ | 209.6.30 | 413 | 0 | 1 | |||
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1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
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** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
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3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase | Short titles | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 1-01 | The Call of the Wolf | 2009.4.21 | 124 | 0 |
BR 1-02 | The Unbrella | 2009.4.22 | 177 | 1 |
BR 1-03 | ***VAMPIRE KILLER*** | 2009.4.26 | 209 | 1 |
BR 1-04 | THE RANSOM OF RED CHIEF | 2009.5.27 | 149 | 0 |
BR 1-05 | Blue Fins | 2009.6.11 | 261 | 1 |
BR 1-06 | ’Shooting Stars' | 2009.6.13 | 172 | 0 |
BR 1-07 | Kim's Choice | 2009.7.5 | 209 | 0 |
BR 1-08 | The Magic Barber | 2009.7.5 | 198 | 0 |
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
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5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
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Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
2009/07/07
About my pet
Now, I introduce about my family’s lovely dogs. There are two dogs in my family. One dog’s name is ‘Lucky’. His kind is mix dog. He is a male and Today 7/7, He became 9 years old. So, today is the Star Festival and his birthday!! ‘Congratulation Lucky!!’.His character is gentle and clever. He is almost not bark. So, he is very good.
The other dog’s name is ‘Kenta’. The name named by me. When I saw him, I think of the name at soon. We got him from owner of bar near the house. He is 1 years old now. He is puppy still. The first, we intend give him for gland mother. Because she is living alone in the house now. We think, pet became people powerful. So, my mother decide to get him from owner of the bar. But, in fact, when he was puppy, he was a very person who feels lonesome easily and he was often bark and naughty. So, my gland mother took care of him. And eventually, we decided have him with Lucky.
At first, Lucky cautioned Kenta. And Kenta had a interest about Lucky very much. There were not fight. We were very relief. Kenta is a good eater something. So, our family worrying it. When, someone’s door of the room’s, Kenta ingress there and he hunt into the garbage can. And he finds something to food. After that, of course!! There are many garbage litter. So, our family is always angry with him. But, ha is not hear the words and he repeat it. Our family is disgust about his it. I think that he is very cute but bad boy. Lucky is not such a things never. Maybe Kenta is puppy still, so he does such a things. I want to him not to do such a things. When Lucky is puppy and adult, our family took him a lot of place. For example, Mountain in Aso, river , sea in Amakusa, to watch dolphin, Kikuchi and so on. So, we have a many memory. I love him and Kenta very very much. Lucky and Kenta look like real brother each other and I think that we are also real brother and family. I’m very happy to meet them and became family with them. Their soul is not so longer than us. So, I must love them more hard. Not to stay regret about them. This is not limit this case, all animal and pet is same. I think that we made happy for their short life.
The other dog’s name is ‘Kenta’. The name named by me. When I saw him, I think of the name at soon. We got him from owner of bar near the house. He is 1 years old now. He is puppy still. The first, we intend give him for gland mother. Because she is living alone in the house now. We think, pet became people powerful. So, my mother decide to get him from owner of the bar. But, in fact, when he was puppy, he was a very person who feels lonesome easily and he was often bark and naughty. So, my gland mother took care of him. And eventually, we decided have him with Lucky.
At first, Lucky cautioned Kenta. And Kenta had a interest about Lucky very much. There were not fight. We were very relief. Kenta is a good eater something. So, our family worrying it. When, someone’s door of the room’s, Kenta ingress there and he hunt into the garbage can. And he finds something to food. After that, of course!! There are many garbage litter. So, our family is always angry with him. But, ha is not hear the words and he repeat it. Our family is disgust about his it. I think that he is very cute but bad boy. Lucky is not such a things never. Maybe Kenta is puppy still, so he does such a things. I want to him not to do such a things. When Lucky is puppy and adult, our family took him a lot of place. For example, Mountain in Aso, river , sea in Amakusa, to watch dolphin, Kikuchi and so on. So, we have a many memory. I love him and Kenta very very much. Lucky and Kenta look like real brother each other and I think that we are also real brother and family. I’m very happy to meet them and became family with them. Their soul is not so longer than us. So, I must love them more hard. Not to stay regret about them. This is not limit this case, all animal and pet is same. I think that we made happy for their short life.
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2009/07/05
BR 1-08: The Magic Barber
I read a book which name is ‘ The Magic Barber’ It is written by John Milne. I decided to read this book by illustration and strange title. At first, I don’t know the words ‘Barber’. Barber is ‘Tokoya’ in Japanese. So, this book written about barber. So, about very strange barber.
This story’s main place is Crossways. There are very quiet town..and there is a sleepy town. I was surprise!! Because this story’s people everybody is also strange. Because everybody in Crossways wears a large hat. The women wear round, black hats. The men wear tall hats. The girls wear square, black hats. The boys wear flat, black hats. So, everybody wear hats really. At first, I think that the people like wearing hats or there are very hot?? But the answer is not.
I also have hats . For example, hats made by wheat, cap, cowboy hat. I favorite hat is a the cowboy hat. It’s color is black and it have a chain. So, it is very fashionable. But I have never go to school with wear it. Because very ashamed. Next time, I try it !!
If you like hats, please read this book.
This story’s main place is Crossways. There are very quiet town..and there is a sleepy town. I was surprise!! Because this story’s people everybody is also strange. Because everybody in Crossways wears a large hat. The women wear round, black hats. The men wear tall hats. The girls wear square, black hats. The boys wear flat, black hats. So, everybody wear hats really. At first, I think that the people like wearing hats or there are very hot?? But the answer is not.
I also have hats . For example, hats made by wheat, cap, cowboy hat. I favorite hat is a the cowboy hat. It’s color is black and it have a chain. So, it is very fashionable. But I have never go to school with wear it. Because very ashamed. Next time, I try it !!
If you like hats, please read this book.
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BR 1-07: Kim's Choice
I read a book which name is a 'Kim's Choice'. This books main character is a Kim. She is a girl and she is a twelve years old. She likes running. So, this story is written about her choice of her school life and her daily life. She is a first runner and she likes running very much. Her school teacher admit the ability and introduce good club team. So, she belongs the club and she practice very hard. her father was very happy the things. He thinks that she became a good runner and famous. He expected her very. Her grade was go up and go up. Kim sometimes win the races. And her father always watches her practice and her competition. But in the course of time, She want time with her friends or boyfriend better than practice time. So, she became choice the time important for her. At last, she choices time with boy friend better than competition. So, she can't win the competition. But she wasn't unhappy. Because she choices the best choice for her. But her father was angry and disappointed the things. Kim doesn't back home she says that she doesn't running now. Her father hops to come back Kim of before .
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Shimizu Yuria ♡
Hello! I introduce about Yuria Shimizu today. She is a my first friend since I entrance this university. We learned English in this university. So, our major is English. We belong same club. It's name is lacrosse. But we don't play lacrosse. Yiria is living in Hokubu town. She came university by car everyday. Her car is Rappin. Color is violet. So, very cute color. I named the car 'Yuraragou'. Because, her house's neighbor is cafe and the name is 'café Yurara'. there are many delicious lunch and dinner and sweets. I have been to there one time. I eat there pumpkin parfait. I t looks very cute and good taste. Sometime I go to university with her by her car. She got license last summer. She driving very good. She know many kind road. When club activity, I ride her car because her drives is very safety. So I think.
She has a 4 people in her family. Her mother, father, Yuria and young brother. Her father is a teacher. I have met him one time. Her young brother was entranced high school near my university. He is a strong player of badminton and he is famous. I think that Yuria is a good sister of him. Yuria’s character is easygoing, cheerful, cute and she always has a strong her opinion.
She favorite food is Potato chip, potatofry of Mac, ikura and so on. Also, she likes sweets very much.
I think Yuria=cute girl. Because she learned about furnishings in high schooldays. So, she is very fashionable. She ware her favorite clothes and jewelry. She favorite brand is ‘CECIL McBEE’. She likes shopping in Fukuoka city. In new year’s day, she went to Fukuoka city to shopping with her family every year. She likes the time very much. Yuria always talks few slowly. It is also her cute point. She looks ……squirrel or hamster. Cute animal. Also, she is a sturdy. So, I always depend on her. She is very cheerful. I like the point. I mended by her when I am with her.
In this spring, she became a happy girl. So, she hope was come true. Now, she looks very happy. She became more cute!!
Sometime we have a not good air each other. But we never do fighting. Sometime, I can’t sorry about her and I can’t become supple mind. But, I really thanks for her. I think that I want to keep friend with Yuria forever. If we advance each road in the future, we can’t meet , We are married and have family each other and We are get old.
Yuria!......always thank you very much.
She has a 4 people in her family. Her mother, father, Yuria and young brother. Her father is a teacher. I have met him one time. Her young brother was entranced high school near my university. He is a strong player of badminton and he is famous. I think that Yuria is a good sister of him. Yuria’s character is easygoing, cheerful, cute and she always has a strong her opinion.
She favorite food is Potato chip, potatofry of Mac, ikura and so on. Also, she likes sweets very much.
I think Yuria=cute girl. Because she learned about furnishings in high schooldays. So, she is very fashionable. She ware her favorite clothes and jewelry. She favorite brand is ‘CECIL McBEE’. She likes shopping in Fukuoka city. In new year’s day, she went to Fukuoka city to shopping with her family every year. She likes the time very much. Yuria always talks few slowly. It is also her cute point. She looks ……squirrel or hamster. Cute animal. Also, she is a sturdy. So, I always depend on her. She is very cheerful. I like the point. I mended by her when I am with her.
In this spring, she became a happy girl. So, she hope was come true. Now, she looks very happy. She became more cute!!
Sometime we have a not good air each other. But we never do fighting. Sometime, I can’t sorry about her and I can’t become supple mind. But, I really thanks for her. I think that I want to keep friend with Yuria forever. If we advance each road in the future, we can’t meet , We are married and have family each other and We are get old.
Yuria!......always thank you very much.
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Diary
Good evening!! I finish today's part-time job at 18:00. I could enjoy it.There were many kind of Animal. For example, puppy, kitten, birds, reptile, fishes, tropical fishes and so on. A lot of people came to today's shop with their lovely dogs. And they enjoyed shopping with family, with friends, with boyfriend or girl friend. I did sumpleing pet food of dog and cat. My two dogs eating today’s food every day for their breakfast and lunch. They like the dog food. Now, many kind of dog food or cat food is developing. So, many owners lose the way when they will buy the food for their pet dog. Today’s shop has a beauty salon for dog. There were few people worked. They cat the dog’s hair and nail. I enjoyed to watch the scene.
But other kind pet food staff of pet food company came there too. At first, I feel bad . So, I called my company’s staff. Because, the other company’s old staff man inspected our company’s food and my works. And, he questioned about my works and my company’s food. So, I also sometime inspected their works and their company’s food. During the lunch time, I went home center near the today’s shop. Because today’s shop has not food corner and near has no food corner. I ate a ‘octopus fritter’. Now, I was surprise that takoyaki has a English name!! I ate a ‘sort octopus fritter’ It taste is very good. Then, I go back the shop and I worked very hard. During I work, my company’s staff came the shop and she cheer my job. I was very happy. She always very kind.
Sometime I think that I want to work such a this company. Because there are good company. Looks very busy and hard, but staff member is very kind and cheerful. I want to such a company. I think that company’s mood is very important.
At last, I finished the job. Sale is so good that I was very happy!! I told many visitor and I saw many cute pet. I back home with my father. He came the shop by car. So, I was little tired but I enjoyed today’s job!!
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But other kind pet food staff of pet food company came there too. At first, I feel bad . So, I called my company’s staff. Because, the other company’s old staff man inspected our company’s food and my works. And, he questioned about my works and my company’s food. So, I also sometime inspected their works and their company’s food. During the lunch time, I went home center near the today’s shop. Because today’s shop has not food corner and near has no food corner. I ate a ‘octopus fritter’. Now, I was surprise that takoyaki has a English name!! I ate a ‘sort octopus fritter’ It taste is very good. Then, I go back the shop and I worked very hard. During I work, my company’s staff came the shop and she cheer my job. I was very happy. She always very kind.
Sometime I think that I want to work such a this company. Because there are good company. Looks very busy and hard, but staff member is very kind and cheerful. I want to such a company. I think that company’s mood is very important.
At last, I finished the job. Sale is so good that I was very happy!! I told many visitor and I saw many cute pet. I back home with my father. He came the shop by car. So, I was little tired but I enjoyed today’s job!!
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