2009/12/30
I like....
talk with people/pie/mixi/internet/cake/cookie/pasta/cheese/meat/English/over seas student/bread/gray/boot/chance/dream/color/rice/Japanese/Japan/ Japanese food/ Japanese culture/kiss/bag/my eye/hart/wish/rip/for example/rhythmic gymnastics/volley ball/music/study/salada/soup/tree/twenty three/my bycicle/car/cool/cute/fresh/suit/Canada/America/Britain/Italy/dictionary/ice/Chinese food/bed/both/smell/house/half/thank you/ good night/lisyening to music/ to read book/to do sport/go out/to think/and so on….
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2009/12/18
Essay 2-02b New I and English
When I was a little childhood, my mother often told to me thank you very much. I think this is the first words I remembered from English. In elementary school, I learned the Roman alphabet. I interested it and English very much. I studied very hard and I wrote a love letter to a favorite boy wrote in the Roman alphabet. This is not foreign memory for me. Also, then I learned English by ALT in English class. I liked the class. In elementary school, I knew pleasure of English.
In junior high school, I didn’t like English because I didn’t like the English teachers They were Japanese. I was a shy person so I didn’t talk in English with teacher or friends. But I began listening to English music, I like English again and I wanted to learn English more. So I began to go to a cram school near my house. Grammar and Listening was to difficult for me but I try hard every time.
In high school, I chose English class as an optional course. I studied to authorized textbook in English. It was very difficult but I tried to it many times. When I was a freshman, I went to Australia by school excursion. That was a first time to go abroad for me. At there I learned a lot of things. The most I thought was an important of language. I wanted to speak with my host family about many things. But I was a very shy and I couldn’t speak. That things was very regrettable. Also when I was a last high school summer, I went to Cambodia to do volunteer from high school. the mother tongue in Cambodia is not English but If I could English, I could communication with Cambodian and I could learn more and more. And when, I decided to study English more in university.
Now I have a dream. So I want to go abroad to study language during in university life. I must try to test to get the chance. I think that it will very difficult but I want to try it!! I want to visit many countries where I don’t know and I want to made many friends from many different countries
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Dec.17
Today was very hard. Because I had two part-time job. One is mannequin of dispatch. Other is casher of supermarket. At morning I went to university to take a class. It’s start at 9:00. 10:30 it was finish and I went to Kumamotohanshin to do job. I have worked to do this job sine two mouth ago. I worked at meat shop. At 12:00 I started it with partner. I met new partner today. She was also some university with me. She was very funny and kind! I worked there with her for 7 hours. I tried to do job very hard. But we often talked with each other about many things. For example about university, local story, friend and boyfriend and so on. And today was birthday of the owner of the meat shop. So I bought piece of a cake and gave for owner. He was very pleased. I also felt happy. And after, owner gave our very high-class meat to eat. We bake it and ate. It taste was …..very good!! Because very soft and sweet. If you ate it, you we surprised!! At 18:30, I finished the job. We change our dress and leave there quickly and went to next part-time job. I also worked there very hard. I worked liquor store at supermarket. There were very cold and free time. Not busy. So I also told with partner about many things. I had a good time.
I thought today’s weather was snow! But in fact, it was not snow. But very cold. I don’t like cold!!! So, my tension was very low. Now, I was tired. Good night every one.
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2009/12/16
Very good tast!

At first I thought that it will be very good taste! But in fact…. It’s not good taste. It’s not so sweet. Please look at the picture. So my mother used it. She made jam from the those apples. The taste was very good!! If you eat it, of course you please it very much!! I most favorite pat was jam stick to apple. Next time I will make it again by myself.
BR-3 Dad and Dan Go Fishing

Chaoter1. Going Fishing
Chapter2. Catch a Fish
Chapter3. Three Cooked Fish
I read a book which name is 7Dad and Dan Go Fishing’. Do you want to know why I chose this book? The reason is picture. The illustration of this book illustrated by computer. I like there illustration very much! Because it’s very funny and real. This book’s main character is Dad and Dan. Dad is a father of Dan.
This is a story about they go to fishing on Saturday. And write about good family. If you read this book, you will able to laugh and feel happy.
One day, Dad and Dan go to fishing. When they last went to fishing, they came home with three fish and excite. So, this time also they want to got more three fishes. They went to port and started fishing. After one hour of fishing, Dad’s pole felt moving. But it was a shoe. Not a fish. They laughed. And after two hours, Dad’s pole felt moving. He was very shouted but in fact it was not a fish. It’s seaweed. Dad said to Dan ‘ If you don’t catch a fish, you can eat the this green seaweed’. They laughed some more. They fished for five hours. But they didn’t catch any fish. On the way home, Dad stooped the car and went to s fish shop. And came out with three fishes. When they goy home, Dad gave Mum the fish box. She looked at the box…. In fact, there were fry of fish!! There were three cooked fish. Thy all laughed.
How about this story? Can you laugh? Or can you felt happy?
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BR-1 THE MESS

Contents
Chapter1 Not Happy
Chapter2 The Broom
Chapter3 The Cupboard
Chapter4 Not a Good Idea
I read a book which name is a ‘THE MESS’. Mean of mess is not clean. This book’s main character is a boy. He can’t clean his room always.
One day, his man shouted to him ‘No going out! No friends over! No TV! No fishing! Not until you have cleaned up this mess!’ She was very angry. His man shouted to him to clean up his room now. But he couldn’t know how to clean his too mess room. Then he has a good idea to get broom and he got it. But where was a floor? There was no floor to sweep. Then he found his cupboard and open. There was empty. So he put in the cupboard. For example his hat, some old toys, shoe, some books, his shorts, and his lunch!! The cupboard was a big help for him.
After that, the mess was gone and his man came to his room. She looked around his room and she praise for him. But in fact, I think that it was not good idea. Do you think so?
Yesterday, I clean up my room. Recently my room also mess. But not so mess better than his room. I don’t like mess. The mess room makes me so unhappy and annoying. So I try to keep clean room every day. How about you? If your room also mess, let’s clean up now!!
Good night!
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2009/12/06
Good holiday ★

This day I met a old friend it’s been a very long time. Mami and Yumika. I have not been met them about seven years. When I met them , Mami was high school student and Yumika is junior high school. But now, Mami is 26 years old and Yumika is 21 years old!! Mami has been worked as a the Japanese
Self-Defense Forces and she married this June.
Yumika is working as a teacher at preschool.
First we went to lunch. So, we went to ‘mother goose’ Do you know this shop?? Mami tought us this café. She have been to lived this café since she was child with her family. We ate set of an omelet containing fried rice. It’s taste very good!! Egg was very soft and delicious!! J!! This coffee in Musashigaoka, please go there! Caffe was not so large but mother of staff was very lovely and great. I want to go there again.

Naext I went to south Oguni to go ‘Chanoko’ Do you know there?? It’s also caffe shop and it’s build next door to ‘Tree of apple’. There famous as a good sweet café. When we went to there, there were very lively by tour visitor. But as time goes by we were only. I older to parfait, Mami older to shiratama dumpling and Yumika olde to Anninn bean curd. We were very full and satisfy! It’s taste so sweet and became happy. And we went to next door to ‘Tree of apple’. There are café and bakery. My family like this bread very much!! My father lived near the shop, so he often bought it and brought us. Also, this café’s garden growing big apple tree and this bakery’s bread of apple and apple pie’s taste very very good. But this day pie was sellout and I was lament. I boug
ht any breads for family.
And last we went to Hikarino Mori to at dimmer and take picture. at first we went to game corner to take print club. we had a very funny time and it finish, we went to 'Sobanoya' I went t the caff first time. when we into the caffe, i was very surprised!! because my class friends Saki working there as a part -time job. Her costume was very great and cool. and it's taste very good!
This day I had not part-time job it’s been a long time. So , I had a good holiday with my old friends. if we have time , i want to meet them again!
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2009/12/02
Essay 03-a I and English

When I was a little child, my mother often said to me ‘thank you very much’. I think that this is the first words I remembered from English. In elementary school, I learned the Roman alphabet. Then I interested it and English very much. I studied it very hard and I wrote a love letter to a favorite boy written in the Roman alphabet. This is not foreign memory for me. Also, then I learned English by ALT in English class. I liked it. In elementary school, I knew pleasure of English.
In junior high school, I didn’t like English because I didn’t like the teachers of English class. They were Japanese. I was a shy person so I didn’t talk in English with teacher or friends. But I began listening to English music, I like English again and I wanted to learn English more. So, I began to go to a cramming school near my house. Grammar and Listening was to difficult for me. But I try hard every time.
And high school, I choose English class as an optional course. Then I studied authorized textbook of English. It was very difficult but I try it many times. When I was a freshman, I went to Australia as a school excursion. That was a first time to go abroad for me. In there I learned a lot of things. The most I thought was an important of language. I wanted to speak with my host family about many things. But I was a very shy and I couldn’t speak. That things t was very regrettable. Also when I was a last high school summer, I went to Cambodia to do volunteer from high school. the mother tongue in Cambodia was not English. But If I could English, I could communication with Cambodian and I could learn more and more. And then I decided to study English more in university.
And now I have a dream so I want to go abroad to study language during in this university life. I must try to test to get the chance and I think that it will very difficult. But I want to try it!! I want to made many friends from many kind of countries and I want to visit many countries where I don’t know.
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2009/11/25
We became twenty years old!!

Oct.4 , I took picture with my sister. Se is my old sister but we are same old. So, we are twin. We were born the same day and we grew up together. My name is Haruna. Her name is Haruka. Can you understand what I want to same. So, our name is same with comedian in Japan. The name is Harisenbon. Oops!! It's not deal with this picture!! The day, we got up very early and I went to hair salon and we were made up! After that we went to shop to take a picture. At first we took a picture each other one self. Next we took a picture together. Last we took a picture with my two gland mother. They were very smiled and we felt very happy.
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2009/11/20
Now I am interesting about China!!!!!

Because I learned history about Japan and China at the class. It’s a not good history. When I watched movie about it yesterday and last Friday, I feel very sad. I thought that it’s never good history, but very important history for Japan and China. I think that I have never forget the movie and I don’t’ forget it.
And recently I made a friend came from China. She is a exchange student. But her Japanese is very good. I was very surprised when I heard the words spoken by her. The Japanese is very beautiful. Recently I made a other senior friend. He is also Japanese very good. And the Japanese spoken by him is also very fluent. They can speak Chinese, Japanese and English very much. I respect to them very much and I wish that I want to become like them.
Next….I like Chinese food very much!!!! For example, Chinese big bowl, Gyouza, Chinese steam meat dumpling, Chinese soup, Chinese snack and so on!!!! I feel very very very very happy when I ate them I was very hungry. Last Wednesday I went to Chinese restaurant near my university with my club member. This was a my first time to visit the restaurant. But before I heard the restaurant taste is very good by my friends. The staff were Chinese at the restaurant, they were very kind. The staff asked older in Japanese. But when they say older to kitchen staff, they spoke Chinese. And this restaurant cook very first and not expensive. The taste was also good!!!!!!! Now, this restaurant became my favorite restaurant J!! If you have never been to there to eat, please do there. You will also become favorite restaurant sure!!!
At last, recently China becoming the country where have many difficult problem. It’s a vey difficult problem around the words. The problem will not able to solve easy. But, it’s a very important for people living around the words and also Chinese. However I think that now the most painful is a Chinese who is living in Japan. Exchange student is also. When I heard bad news about China, I always sad and think about them. I wish that sometime the problem as a it will nothing for ever.
Would you understand the reason why I interesting about China? From now on I will study Chinese by myself. It’s will very difficult but I want to try!! I want to became to speak beautiful Chinese!!! If someone can Chinese, please contact me and please teach me!!
That’s all thank youJ!! I will just leave my university. Because I am in library ….
See you ~♡
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2009/11/18
X's mas will be coming soon ★


Today I checked my G-mail when today’s first class of writing class in the morning. I got a mail by Mr. tomei. It’s a not good mail for me. Because the content is warming about my blog. So, recently I didn’t write blog. Book review is nothing…… Because I was very busy and not so good my body. But I thought that it’s very pinch!! So, I must try so hard just now!! I want to good credit!!
Yesterday I went to shopping in down town with Japanese Lounge staff and any overseas students. Before that, I finish class I went to downtown with my friend Miura. Do you know her?? She has a beautiful very black hair girl. So, we would go there to see or buy new boot!! When arrived in downtown, we met a little purity girl. Her name is Yui. She is also my same class member. She came down town to buy a X’ mas present for her boy friend. She told me that she want to go shop to buy it and please came to there together. So, we went do shop with Yui. The shop is very nice. There were men’s shop. Yui choose good present for her boy friend and bought it!! Her face is very smile. I think that her boyfriend will also become smile when he opens the present!! I also felt happy.
After that we went to PARCO to see boot. This day, I wanted to short boot and my friend wanted to engineer boot. We went to boot shop and we got a new boot!! We didn’t many money but we could get good boot. I pleased the this boot very much. After that we went to “Tikafesu” to take Purikura. This is the first time to take it. We enjoyed the time together and we did good-bye!!
So, todays main event is to go shopping to buy X’ mas decoration with Lounge staff member and any overseas students. We would meet up at 18:30 in front of SATABA in shinshigai. Then the time was just 18:00 and I had a half time by the time of promise. So I into the store and I spend with drinking and eating during I was waiting them. At 18:45, all member meet up there and we went to 100yen shop to buy the X’ mas decoration gods. For example doll of Santa Claus, reindeer, snow man, tree, candle, many kind of X’ mas cute ornament gods. Exchange students looked very fun! And me too. Recently, the 100 yen shop is very great! Because there is buying many king of gods. For example, wear, party gods, food, so snack, drink, stationery, cosmetic and so on. If you should something to buy, first of all you have to come to the 100 yen shop! You will able to find it sure. So, after we were bought many goods in there, we went to Ihiran to eat Chinese noodle. This house is my favorite places. The first time, I eat this house in Fukuoka. Then I wait about one hour to eat this house. It’s very tired but I became this Chinese noodle shop very much!! If you have never been to Ichiran, please go there. You will be able to satisfaction surer!! After that we split up with.
This day, I had a good time. I have not spoke English very much yet, but I think that I want to talk with exchange student more and more. So, I think that talk or spend with exchange students is very important for me. Do you think so too??
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2009/11/11
Speaking speach
I think that almost student have part- time job in university days. I also has any part-time job and I work at weekday and holiday. At weekday, I work in supermarket in near my house. I have been worked there since I entrance this University. So, for a year and half. Now, I work there a few times a week. I work there as a casher from evening to night or midnight. This part-time job is not so difficult. But instead pay is also not so expensive. I enjoy this work. I looking forward to meet visitor every time. When I can get ‘ Thank you very much ‘ by visitor, I feel very happy!! I will been continue this job.
At holiday, I work as a tour conductor in travel company. I have been this work since half year before. Almost people works this job as a business. But I work this job as a part-time job at holiday. Half year before, this job was introduction by my club’s old chief. He got a job in this travel company since half year before. First time, I am very tense. So, I could not sleep enough every time. Also, this work must get up early every time. But I get up early is wake-point for me. But recently, I can enjoy this job. This job’s good point is , I can go many places that I have not ever been to. For example, last Saturday, I went to Tosu to do shopping tour. This tour was very easy. In there, I have free time about six hour. So, I also enjoy shopping!! And last Sunday, I went to Hakataza in Fukuoka to watch Kitazima Saburou’s exhabition. The tour was Kitazima Saburou’s special exhabotion. The day before, a woman cancel this tour, so I can get the rest ticket. So, I can watch the Kitazima Saburou’ exhabiton. I was lucky and I had a good time. So, I could sped good holiday!!
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2009/11/04
introduce.
Now, I interested about sport shop. So, I resarch about famous and popular sport shop. please read my esseay!! Now many sport makers saport to sport player and production many kind of wear , shoose, food ,drink and so on. I like sport and I like the good idea very much!
UNIQLO
When I saw this page, I was very surprise! What a colorful and stylish!
I like UNIQLO. This brand lived a lot of people around the word. Of course very popular in Japan. This pages top has many topics and put on many kinds of model. For example, Kenich Matyuyama. He is a actor. Ann. She isa model. Sportsman and artist.
NIKE
Nike is so simple and often cute! I like this brand very much!!
PUMA
This is very simple and very cool. If some one likes sport, Maybe he likes this brand.
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2009/10/28
Short list (2-3) sites
2009/10/21
Essays2-01a-bFavPlace
And my university has a lot of tree. Now, we can enjoy colored leaves and relax by them so I love this season the best.
Next my favorite place is my room. There are not so large. But the room is fit for me and my room is surround with my favorite color. So, the room make me always happy and relax. Of course my house is also my favorite places. There are my good family and cute dogs. I can relax very much.
I like yuria’s car. Because her car is small and have a cute color and seat. I think that not so large space make me calm. Her car’s kind is lappin and the color is purple. Also, I often rode on her car to go to University. when I rode on her car, I can listening to music of my favorite. Because our favorite artist is same.
Our university’s library is also my favorite places. There are many kind of books and video. There are very popular by this University student. I usually go to there When I am free time or after school. Always I enjoy the time with my friends.
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2009/10/07
Draft essay1a: Favorite places
2009/09/09
Aug.1
This day my second summer vacation was started. At last, my hard test time was end. Summer vacation of University is very long. Maybe it has about two months. But in fact, this long vacation will finish in a flash. The first day I walked part-time job with my class mate at once. The job is a-nation. A- nation is a big live ob big artist. For example, Ayumi Hamasaki, mihimaruGT, Touhoushinki and so on. They come in Kumamoto is very awesome for us. My job is to sale goods for fun. My booth’s artist is Touhoushinki. They are most famous artist group in Japan and they have many fun in Japan. Most many fun is elder. The job is very hard but I can enjoy. I could not watched the live, But I could enjoyed atmosphere. But in fact, I wanted to join the live better than as a part-time job. I could enjoy the day with Miura Kana and Manami Sakamoto. And I could get much money.
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Long time I skip my blog.
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2009/07/19
BR 1-12: THE FIFTEENTH VHARACTER
I read a book which name is THE FIFTEENTH CHARACTER. It was written by Rosemary Border. This story’s illustration is very cute and good. I like it very much. This story’s main character are many children. They are very funny and powerful and nice!! This story was written about these children and their job. Please read this book!BR 1-11: The Big bag Mistake

I read a book which name is The Big Bag Mistake. It was written by Jhon Escott. This story’s main character is a Gisela and Riccard. It is very funny story. First, Ricardo and Gisela are going home to Rio. Gisela likes reading and quiet people. But Ricard likes noise and he likes Gisela. When, they arrived in Rio. I there, a thief takes Gisela’s bag. It is very shock for her. But in fact, the bag was not her bag. It is his bag. So, she save. Because her bag have very important ofject for her
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BR 1-10: Carnival

I like carnival very much too. Summer vacation will come soon this year. I want to go many places to watch the carnival. For example Tamana, Hinokuni festival and so on. Carnival makes me and many people happy and smile. It is a very important festival in the word.
2009/07/15
Essey 1-03b: Good story
First, I will write about Lilo. She is a young girl. Who is a five years old. Her family only two people, she and her old sister Nani. Lilo has not parent. Her parent was dead during traffic accident. So she is living with her only one family. Lilo and her sister loved their parent very much. She living Hawaii and Dance of Hawaii very much. She has no friends but she wants to have real friends very much.
Second, I wil write about Nani. She is old sister of Lilo. She is very steadily. She works very hard instead of Lolo’s parent. Because they have a no parent. She care for Liro very hard. They are fighting almost every day. Nani hits Lilo and she flee from place to place. But, she love her young sister in fact.
Stitch is an alien which made by a scientist of space. The scientist is also alien. At first, Stitch was very violent alien. He was also struggle and destroyed many things. When He came earth was also too. And stitch was unknown about love. Because He was not have friend and family. He was always alone and lonely. When Stitch came earth, Lilo has not friend. So, Nina gave Stitch for Lilo as a pet. Tirst, they were not succeed to livegan to with. In fact, few time spend, they become enjoy their life together.
In real life, Five people in my family. My mother, father, old sister, and young sister. I have good family and they are always living together and they support me what happen. And I also have many good friends. They are always kind me. I must thanks for my family and my friends.
This move taught me many things. I learned about friendship and family. . I haven't spend much time with my family recently. But now I feel that I should increase time spend with them, and cherish the time. l think that I have to love my family more as a Nani. I want to became Nani. Because She is important people of my family’s member.
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2009/07/09
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Essey 1-02b: My opinion about University life
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Diary
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2009/07/08
portfolio for writing III
Student ID: 13108123
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C
[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]
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0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
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Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
1-01a (2009.04.08) | A letter for my new host family | 2009.4.8 | 283 | 15 | 0 | |||
1-01b (2009.04.20) | New Who am I !! | 2009.4.22 | 339 | 0 | 0 | |||
(1-01c) | University Life | 2009.5.27 | 300 | 0 | 0 | |||
1-02a (2009.06.01) | rev Dear host family | 2009.6.10 | 334 | 0 | 0 | |||
1-02b (2009.07.06) | Lilo and Stitch | 209.6.30 | 413 | 0 | 1 | |||
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W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | ||||
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | ||||
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | ||||
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | ||||
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | ||||
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
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2.6. Additional reflections on comments
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
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3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase | Short titles | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 1-01 | The Call of the Wolf | 2009.4.21 | 124 | 0 |
BR 1-02 | The Unbrella | 2009.4.22 | 177 | 1 |
BR 1-03 | ***VAMPIRE KILLER*** | 2009.4.26 | 209 | 1 |
BR 1-04 | THE RANSOM OF RED CHIEF | 2009.5.27 | 149 | 0 |
BR 1-05 | Blue Fins | 2009.6.11 | 261 | 1 |
BR 1-06 | ’Shooting Stars' | 2009.6.13 | 172 | 0 |
BR 1-07 | Kim's Choice | 2009.7.5 | 209 | 0 |
BR 1-08 | The Magic Barber | 2009.7.5 | 198 | 0 |
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3.2. Best Book Review
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Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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2009/07/07
About my pet


The other dog’s name is ‘Kenta’. The name named by me. When I saw him, I think of the name at soon. We got him from owner of bar near the house. He is 1 years old now. He is puppy still. The first, we intend give him for gland mother. Because she is living alone in the house now. We think, pet became people powerful. So, my mother decide to get him from owner of the bar. But, in fact, when he was puppy, he was a very person who feels lonesome easily and he was often bark and naughty. So, my gland mother took care of him. And eventually, we decided have him with Lucky.
At first, Lucky cautioned Kenta. And Kenta had a interest about Lucky very much. There were not fight. We were very relief. Kenta is a good eater something. So, our family worrying it. When, someone’s door of the room’s, Kenta ingress there and he hunt into the garbage can. And he finds something to food. After that, of course!! There are many garbage litter. So, our family is always angry with him. But, ha is not hear the words and he repeat it. Our family is disgust about his it. I think that he is very cute but bad boy. Lucky is not such a things never. Maybe Kenta is puppy still, so he does such a things. I want to him not to do such a things. When Lucky is puppy and adult, our family took him a lot of place. For example, Mountain in Aso, river , sea in Amakusa, to watch dolphin, Kikuchi and so on. So, we have a many memory. I love him and Kenta very very much. Lucky and Kenta look like real brother each other and I think that we are also real brother and family. I’m very happy to meet them and became family with them. Their soul is not so longer than us. So, I must love them more hard. Not to stay regret about them. This is not limit this case, all animal and pet is same. I think that we made happy for their short life.
2009/07/05
BR 1-08: The Magic Barber

This story’s main place is Crossways. There are very quiet town..and there is a sleepy town. I was surprise!! Because this story’s people everybody is also strange. Because everybody in Crossways wears a large hat. The women wear round, black hats. The men wear tall hats. The girls wear square, black hats. The boys wear flat, black hats. So, everybody wear hats really. At first, I think that the people like wearing hats or there are very hot?? But the answer is not.
I also have hats . For example, hats made by wheat, cap, cowboy hat. I favorite hat is a the cowboy hat. It’s color is black and it have a chain. So, it is very fashionable. But I have never go to school with wear it. Because very ashamed. Next time, I try it !!
If you like hats, please read this book.
BR 1-07: Kim's Choice

Shimizu Yuria ♡
She has a 4 people in her family. Her mother, father, Yuria and young brother. Her father is a teacher. I have met him one time. Her young brother was entranced high school near my university. He is a strong player of badminton and he is famous. I think that Yuria is a good sister of him. Yuria’s character is easygoing, cheerful, cute and she always has a strong her opinion.
She favorite food is Potato chip, potatofry of Mac, ikura and so on. Also, she likes sweets very much.
I think Yuria=cute girl. Because she learned about furnishings in high schooldays. So, she is very fashionable. She ware her favorite clothes and jewelry. She favorite brand is ‘CECIL McBEE’. She likes shopping in Fukuoka city. In new year’s day, she went to Fukuoka city to shopping with her family every year. She likes the time very much. Yuria always talks few slowly. It is also her cute point. She looks ……squirrel or hamster. Cute animal. Also, she is a sturdy. So, I always depend on her. She is very cheerful. I like the point. I mended by her when I am with her.
In this spring, she became a happy girl. So, she hope was come true. Now, she looks very happy. She became more cute!!
Sometime we have a not good air each other. But we never do fighting. Sometime, I can’t sorry about her and I can’t become supple mind. But, I really thanks for her. I think that I want to keep friend with Yuria forever. If we advance each road in the future, we can’t meet , We are married and have family each other and We are get old.
Yuria!......always thank you very much.
Diary
But other kind pet food staff of pet food company came there too. At first, I feel bad . So, I called my company’s staff. Because, the other company’s old staff man inspected our company’s food and my works. And, he questioned about my works and my company’s food. So, I also sometime inspected their works and their company’s food. During the lunch time, I went home center near the today’s shop. Because today’s shop has not food corner and near has no food corner. I ate a ‘octopus fritter’. Now, I was surprise that takoyaki has a English name!! I ate a ‘sort octopus fritter’ It taste is very good. Then, I go back the shop and I worked very hard. During I work, my company’s staff came the shop and she cheer my job. I was very happy. She always very kind.
Sometime I think that I want to work such a this company. Because there are good company. Looks very busy and hard, but staff member is very kind and cheerful. I want to such a company. I think that company’s mood is very important.
At last, I finished the job. Sale is so good that I was very happy!! I told many visitor and I saw many cute pet. I back home with my father. He came the shop by car. So, I was little tired but I enjoyed today’s job!!
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2009/07/01
Enjoy night.
Good evening . now, I enjoy. Because my club’s cute junior came my house. Their name is Ayaka Mori and Miya Nagamine. They are same club with me and they are very cute for me. Always they called me ‘Harunei’. I am very grade. Now, I teaching English to Ayaka . She brings her English home work.to my house. And now, we finished it!! We are very happy and glad. Miya has been read her favorite comic since at 11:00. She looks very funny. She reads a ‘one peace’ . I have been borrowed the book by my club’s member since on February. I borrowed it in my spring vacation. And we are talking about many things. For example, about school, club member, love story and so on. I don’t finished to read it. Yesterday is our club’s event. We are looking forward to it very much!!
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2009/06/28
Today's part-time job!

I got up early bwtter than every morning. Because I have a part-time job in 'sannko pet and green'in Motoyama city. Motoyama city is near my University than my house. I am very sleepy. Yesterday I could not went to bed early. because I have to do many things recently. For example home work, about club ivent so on. Today’s part-time's kind is about pet food. I did this kind works before. It's not so difficult. But I must study about dog and cat. Also about pet food.When I warks about this kind part-time job, I must be careful. So, I don't say ' neko''inu'. I must say 'neko chan' 'inu chan' about pet. At 9:oo, I must go today's part-time's shop.
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2009/06/27
Vacation plans

I will talk about my summer vacation plans this year. I want to go Yolon island with my club member and I want to Yakushima with family. I don't have plans. But I have many places to want to go. But this summer vacation, I will study English and I must study bout trip course very hard. Because, I want to go Cambodia last summer vacation to study about Cambodia to do volunteer. So. I must use English very well. Also, the year after next summer vacation I want to Hawaii to study English. I think that long summer vacation is very important for me.
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